No One Was Supposed To Be Here, Scene 01

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NO ONE WAS SUPPOSED TO BE HERE Terrified Maid DPed By Two Burglars Who Surprise Her During Home InvasionSCENE OPENS on Jack Johnny Goodluck and Leo Robby Echo. They are in the car looking out at a house on a residential street. Leo is nervous about what theyre about to do, but Jack reassures him, stating that the door is unlocked and the family wont be home for hours. They slip ski masks over their heads and get out of the car. CUT TO TITLEJack and Leo cautiously approach the home and open the door, going inside. They take off their ski-masks and look around, getting a sense of the place. They are clearly there to rob the house. Thinking that they are alone, they make no effort to speak in low voices. Just as Jack and Leo turn around to go their separate ways, they freeze, looking at something. Leo looks shocked and panicked. Jack appears shocked as well, but also a little curious, almost intrigued. Standing in the living room is a young woman, Maggie Candice Dare, a cleaning rag and spray bottle dropped to the floor in front of her, forgotten. She is frozen in total fear. Maggie is a maid who the men did not anticipate being home. Leo is in a panic while Jack is calm but f

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